Fatal Radiance - Chapter 4

This time around Fatal Radiance has a Strict Mature Rating as this chapter includes torture, gore, and also sexually suggestive themes (no explicit sex scenes or descriptive nudity, but implications).

I thank for motivating me a lot lately with writing the story further. I was rather excited and wrote so fast I even worked on a few other things simultaneaosly.
I joked a bit with him about how I actually am a bit like Disney because everyone is an orphan except Aldric and Vidar. Of course, unlike Disney I love brutal violence on-screen, so while I didn't have a massacre there is death and it's not pleasant for those involved. Especially Leofwine. I actually considered this a while back, to make him kill someone to make him confront his fears and I will say it is not over, yet. As for Vidar... Aldric says it best, he is a moron and he really did screw this one for himself up. The second part of this chapter was to showcase a bit about his lack of temperance. At first humorous, but then it got rather dark in the end when Leofwine gets angry at him and things escalate.

A wee thing, I used Irish for Aldric when he comes to the conclusion what Leofwine is hiding and changes language to make it less awkward for the otter... In any case, if I should have made a mistake, please tell me.

In any case, here are a few terms explained:

meinfretr - Norse for stinkfart
moll - It means the same as slut basically.
cad - An Insult for someone that only cares for himself.
to shag - Having intercourse with someone.