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Fatal Radiance - Chapter 11

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Alrighty, here is chapter 11 of Fatal Radiance. Ergo, the part where I have now finally reached the point of having a character do the one thing that Vidar forgot last time around. So, does that mean the world is saved? Well, apart from having a Civil War in the north, a ton of social problems everywhere, and the fact that things did not turn out too well for Crawford here. And I also finally reached the point I have been working on with Lucille and Khaba ever since chapter five, which was intended ever since chapter 2 to go there.

Meanwhile I am working on chapter 12, where other things happen. Unlike this one here however, it might be getting pretty grim.

By the way, whoever finds all the sun symbolism in this chapter first gets 400 points from me.
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So we get reptiles in the universe now and it would seem they're somewhat rare, considering Lucille and Crawford's reaction. (To be fair though, I would be pretty freaked out if a walking crocodile answered a door) Also great moment with Lucille when Crawford scolded those pompous bats. The two thumbs up. XD 

Time to get Crawford's power back! But my prediction is that he may not get it back. He seems to be embracing his inventor/engineer role.